the first one is good as I read.
but the following are always begine with the same letter,i thought it\'s a little bother to recite that, do you think so?
随着一声『玉皇大帝到』,从天上掉下一滴甘露正好落在你的嘴唇上!
你在恍惚中看见了13两黄金。
I admire your English level. It is abosolutely wonderful . but because I am poor in English so I can not offer ten sentense for everyone,please forgive me